Review: nitrotek.co.uk

[jitendraag]

I need a design / layout and 'call to action' placement feedback on this page first. End of the day, it's a sales page ;-)

The page lists rc helicopters, a model photograph and description about each. Will it be good if I provided more photo option here?

So it's not more like eye candy design feedback that I want, I am more concerned about this page as a landing page and making sales.

[AlexGubert]

Hi
in my humble opinion, the endless side columns doesn't look right, it would be nice to have also a picture of the product and a description on the side of each item, instead of below. It look too busy to the eye.
I get a little shocked with the green neon too, but it has a lot to do with the products you sell - it look kinda lightning bolt...
Thanks

[FHN]

Originally Posted by AlexGubert

Hi
in my humble opinion, the endless side columns doesn't look right

That's right. Looks like a Tyco Website, 90's toys.
The purple "mouse over" color it's hard to see sometimes, maybe you can pick some another color.
Right to the focus, the products, descriptions. I like it.

[2advance]

The collections and designs of the new helicopters are looking quite good. I like your menu design, looks good and attractive..

[~kev~]

The site is nice, but the header image is too big. Its weighing in at 56.05 KB (57391 bytes) - which is 1/2 of the recommended maximum size for a webpage.

The long links at the bottom of the page look tachy and unprofessional. Stream line them so they are not so long.

Your meta description is too long and full of trash words

<meta name="Description" content="Nitro radio controlled cars, we also offer a selection of petrol remote control car and nitro cars. Offering rc petrol cars and rc helicopter selection." />

Trash words include we, also, offer, a of, and, rc. RC can stand for RC cola, Radio controlled,,,, and probably several other things.

A meta description like

Nitro radio controlled cars and helicopter

Would probably serve you a lot better.