Review: ReviewGameOnline.com

ReviewGameGuy · 10-26-2009, 07:27 PM

Alright, it just about done and I need some feedback here. Things to remove, things to add, you tell me and ill do it. Thanks guys!

http://www.reviewgameonline.com

Gammaray · 10-26-2009, 08:05 PM

I feel like the site is a little jumbled. I feel like there should be some dividers here and there to center certain content. Maybe this is intentional, but the ads look an awful lot like the content, and my first impression was that the site was a "trap" and that anything I clicked would lead to an ad.

My only other concern would be content. I took a look at the Borderlands review and the paragraph next to the video is almost word-for-word the same as Gamespot.

http://www.reviewgameonline.com/borderlands.php
http://www.gamespot.com/xbox360/acti...ds/review.html

I don't think I need to explain why, if uncredited, that is unacceptable. Also, as a fellow video game site creator, I just can't see why I would head over to your site and skip out on Gamespot, GameTrailers, GiantBomb, etc... If your reviews are going to be "short and sweet" put some life into them. Humor works.

Also reword your "Welcome to Review Game Online" statement at the top of the site. It's not an easy read, and it got me confused as to whether or not your site reviewed games, or reviewed the reviews of games. I know that sounds insane, but that is literally what I had to ask myself after reading that.

Good luck.

ReviewGameGuy · 10-26-2009, 08:35 PM

Ya that's embarrassing having your friends write the detailed reviews for you, then have someone else tell you they are not unique. Thanks, Ive got work to do. I better check the other ones....

ncovill · 10-28-2009, 02:26 PM

I actually love the concept of this site. But it's structured pretty poorly.
Like Gamm said, it's all jumbled together. Try to add some more layout structure to make it more eye pleasing. Also, I strongly suggest working on getting a logo done. A Logo can make or break a site. It's the first thing people see. If they don't like it, or think it's professional, they will exit right away.

ReviewGameGuy · 10-28-2009, 09:13 PM

Thanks, but i have a logo. Its at the bottom of every page...?

kenjpet · 11-11-2009, 12:07 PM

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