About that first post. I don't think of things that Vastlance can do for me. That's what way you wrote it. Instead, change the phrase to "what can Vastlance do for me."
I realize that I changed another word in there. Specifically the "you" for "me." I did that because I really don't care what Vastlance can do for you. I care what it can do for me.
Don't tell me what comes into my mind. I know that. And frankly, that's not what came into my mind when I first came into the site. So you were wrong about that.
The next few lines for me was the end of that paragraph. Here's how I would rewrite your first post.
What is Vastlance and what can Vastlance do for you? Ss you continue reading, we will try to answer these questions to the best of our ability and clarify all your doubts.
Vastlance is an outsourcing website offering great new functions that will able to manage your work better, along with excellent security solutions and essential tools that will prevent anyone from being scammed. You can reap these benefits once you join us either as a freelancer or as a project buyer. Vastlance promises to give you the best work environment with all necessary tools to manage and secure your efforts and make the best of it.
I realize that I left the "you" in there instead of changing it to "me" like I did above. This is because the way I rewrote it you are talking and not narrating what is supposedly going through my head. This way the word you refers to the visitor since the the site is talking, as opposed to you referring to the site since the visitor is talking.