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Old 09-02-2013, 09:23 PM
shovenose shovenose is offline
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Originally Posted by mirohristov View Post
There's no way in hell you'll get away with a huge Welcome to [company name] on the first page. 'Welcome' belong on a door mat and 90's websites.

There's no way you'll get away with h1 tag with arial as a logo either. (as someone already pointed out)

First page is the decision maker. A go or a no.
If the design is neat and professional and not template looking, I'll read your h2 tags. If the copy in your h2 tags is simple and up to the point, I'll read your p tags. If I still feel good after reading and you didn't get any bad points MAYBE i'll view your other pages... The other pages need to be as compelling, of course

You definitely need a clear "PRICES" or "PLANS" in your navigation.
Then use 'sub-pages' or tabs for each plan (Web Hosting | Virtual Private Servers| Dedicated Servers)

Attached is a mockup for the bare minimum, in terms of design, for me to consider using your service.
-Phone number must be in the upper right.
-Image looks better taking up all the width.
-Thinner header.
-Cooler fonts
-Distinct clickable buttons
-Found the logo element for free (google: free hosting logo)

That's just me
wow! that is epic I'm waiting on a designer to make me a new logo. I'll implement some stuff from your design thanks!!
 
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