Review : creationage.com - Page 2

Jazzee · 10-18-2003, 06:02 PM

That's what I thought.

gecko · 10-18-2003, 06:08 PM

after you are done rewriting its called "the" rewrite or "A" rewrite

but my correction was that she was missing a word

Jazzee · 10-18-2003, 06:10 PM

...needs to be rewritten.

gecko · 10-18-2003, 06:14 PM

right

CrAg · 10-19-2003, 10:15 PM

Hello guys!
Just want to tell ya all that raciviusdawn is the best.
He rewrote my web site for me. It is really good. My site never looked better than now. It is smokin' now. I really like it. I am happy.

So if you need to rewrite your web site, I really recommend raciviusdawn cuz he is a professional.

You can check out my web site now(i did not fix the menu yet, but text is changed):

http://www.creationage.com

So what do you think now?

Thank's again raciviusdawn

AcRoNym · 10-19-2003, 10:33 PM

Dear costumers, found on home page

nice site though

DaveyBoy · 10-19-2003, 10:51 PM

yeah 'rewritten' is a word, but she wrote 'needs rewritten' which isn't correct lol, should have been either 'needs rewriting' or 'needs to be rewritten'.

Just saying how gecko meant it. lol

DaveyBoy · 10-19-2003, 10:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CrAg

Hello guys!
Just want to tell ya all that raciviusdawn is the best.
He rewrote my web site for me. It is really good. My site never looked better than now. It is smokin' now. I really like it. I am happy.

So if you need to rewrite your web site, I really recommend raciviusdawn cuz he is a professional.

You can check out my web site now(i did not fix the menu yet, but text is changed):

http://www.creationage.com

So what do you think now?

Thank's again raciviusdawn

The text on the home page, i still think could be better, it has a very 'roundabout' way of saying things.

CrAg · 10-19-2003, 11:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DaveyBoy

The text on the home page, i still think could be better, it has a very 'roundabout' way of saying things.

I like it this way too. This is the best intro i've had.

CrAg · 10-19-2003, 11:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AcRoNym

Dear costumers, found on home page

raciviusdawn did not rewrite that one. He only rewrote Intro and CrAg WebSet.

raciviusdawn · 10-20-2003, 07:15 AM

thanks dude...i think it sounds a lot better than your previous intro. writing is a style...it has to fit in each different circumstance...not all site intros should sound the same because not all sites have the same makeup ya know...

anyway, glad i could help and even more glad that you like it.