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Old 06-16-2007, 05:02 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 06-18-2007, 05:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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When I went to your "Be Healthy Forum" under latest blog, what I got was this message and a page of code:

This XML file does not appear to have any style information associated with it. The document tree is shown below.

You may want to check up on that issue.
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Old 06-21-2007, 10:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Can you tell me exactly where did you got this message, because I cant reproduce it

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Old 06-21-2007, 02:05 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Those link colors in the content are hard to read. Try to use something darker on the white background.

Also the same problem with the links on the left sidebar, although that one is when I'm hovering over a link so it's not as big of a problem.

Also, in the Popular Topics box you might want to consider making those links an unordered list or something. It's hard to tell where one title stops and another begins.
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Old 06-22-2007, 10:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I made some changes to the right side. I put some delimiters for better distinction.
Do you think now is better.

Do you have any other suggestion about the desing or some seo tips?

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Old 06-23-2007, 06:27 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi can you check out the forum.

http://behealthyforum.com/index.html
. What do you think about the adsense position. Do you think there is any other better way of placing the adsense.

Also what do you thing about the design. Do you have any suggestions?
About th colors, the header picture etc

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Old 06-23-2007, 11:06 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Hi can you check out the forum.

http://behealthyforum.com/index.html
. What do you think about the adsense position. Do you think there is any other better way of placing the adsense.

Also what do you thing about the design. Do you have any suggestions?
About th colors, the header picture etc

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Ads left side are clear - you may want to consider this
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Old 06-24-2007, 09:31 AM   #8 (permalink)
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great design, and even beter video

as i said great design, specialy about video section wkich is realy peace of art for me!
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Old 06-25-2007, 11:13 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Terrible site imho. Design is flawed. No images outside of header which doesn't seem to fit the topic. It's spammy with ads everywhere. I gotta say I don't like a single thing about the site. I wanted to click away as fast as possible which might be a good thing if you can get actual visitors. I have sites that are terrible and make me great money because of it.

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Old 06-26-2007, 03:18 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Hi,

thanks for the honest opinion. I agree with all of your remarks.
Can you give me some suggestions in order to improve my layout and design?

Thank you very much

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Interesting idea about the terrible sites. NEver tought of something like that.
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Old 06-29-2007, 10:02 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Hey anybody has any other suggestions?
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I think it is not a good position of adsense on the site now. And why do you have two adsense block's? I think it's enough to have only one block (under "Atkins diet" label),imho.
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Old 06-30-2007, 12:57 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I'll copy the idea

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I don't know what it is, I just...... find it hard on the eyes, and it doesn't flow....... A plainer style in this case would be better.......
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Old 06-30-2007, 01:16 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Sorry guys.. We have all missed one little thing out

You are allowed only 3 ads from google per page.. You have 5... You need to sort that out...
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Old 06-30-2007, 07:13 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Well You can have
I quote from google adsense:

"Google AdSense program policies allow you to place up to three ad units and one link unit on any page

Google AdSense program policies allow you to place up to two AdSense for search boxes on any page.

Google AdSense program policies allow you to place two referral units per product on any page"

Let me know where I am wrong because I have
1 google search per page
1 referal program per page,
3 add units per page
0 link units per page


Please let me know if I am right and please give me the wrong URL so I can make changes if something is wrong?

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Old 06-30-2007, 07:20 PM   #16 (permalink)
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About the design

Do you think more pictures on the home page would help?

Or on every page?

Or maybe more colors
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1. It's too much adsense. The user may feel uncomfortable.
2. Maybe the color should be darked. It's too light now. Looks like being in the mountain covered with snow.
3.Why not move the login form onto the top right corner to be easily found?

Hope it goes well.
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Old 07-05-2007, 07:18 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Yap, i agree the forum way too much adsensing.

For the main site, maybe you could display 10 topics instead, it just don't look tat good with one side shorter than the other.

The links you put in the middle, you might want to either use a darker colour or change the background for tat particular area. You might want to put a footer, though not tat important it just look better imo
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Old 07-06-2007, 08:47 AM   #19 (permalink)
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The opening page looks pretty good. There is a lot of blue going on there. The light blue text is a little tough to read on a monitor set to a high resolution.
Once you get into the site there are a lot of ads. I don't know if they are a necessary evil, but it seems like they are everywhere.
There are too many categories of food on the first page. Some are redundant.
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Old 07-11-2007, 11:25 AM   #20 (permalink)
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One thing that jumped out on me was a spelling mistake. begginer should be spelt 'beginner'. I don't mean to be finicky but these small things can be a bit off-putting to visitors.
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