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Old 09-27-2007, 07:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 09-27-2007, 08:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The colors are very bright, quite hard on the eyes.

The header text on the individual blog entries is white, you should maybe darken that, it is near impossible to read!

You should definitely look for another color combination.
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Old 09-27-2007, 08:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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well i will try to do that.I think the header colour is not white but i will look over it.Thanks reput added.
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Old 09-27-2007, 09:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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You have to change complete color combination of your blog. It's very bright and unclear to me ... sorry!
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Old 09-28-2007, 09:54 PM   #5 (permalink)
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White text on bright green doesn't work. For that matter neither does the pink, but it looks like it does compared to the white.

Change the colors. I can't even look at the rest of it without hurting my eyes.
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Old 09-29-2007, 06:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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The colors are very bright, quite hard on the eyes.

The header text on the individual blog entries is white, you should maybe darken that, it is near impossible to read!

You should definitely look for another color combination.
Yes, Right.! I aggree.!
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Old 09-29-2007, 07:11 PM   #7 (permalink)
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thanks guys i will do it.SOON
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Old 09-29-2007, 08:17 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Sorry.. same feedback.. can barely read the headlines of the articles.. that is too frustrating to make me want to stay I like the fades and things.. just use a darker font.. you could probably even keep all the colors
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Old 09-30-2007, 12:12 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 10-01-2007, 12:54 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Wait a minute i will do it as soon as possible i have contacted the guy who designed it.As i get a contact with him i will change it.Thanks
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Old 10-01-2007, 05:08 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Somebody did that for you? I hope you didn't pay him for the job.
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Old 10-01-2007, 08:18 AM   #12 (permalink)
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The layout is good but the design and colour scheme is quite light . I did not see the title of each post. You need to combined it with dark and light colour.
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Old 10-01-2007, 09:08 AM   #13 (permalink)
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cool design, needs some more padding in places
good colour scheme
markup needs a bit of a tidy-up (learning to code html manually will help). also there's lots of unsemantic html tags so there's plenty of room for improvement
but a nice design still
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Old 10-01-2007, 04:01 PM   #14 (permalink)
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cool design, needs some more padding in places
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You've got to be kidding me

The colors, like said before.. are wrong in all perspectives. Also, the gradients.. there is nothing done with them except being a gradient of the background to foreground.

I'd say, try finding a color scheme you like, and let it be based on that.

You mentioned someone designed this for you. If you payed for this.. I'd advice you to ask for a refund and find a capable designer (no offense intended ofcourse, but this just won't do)
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Old 10-01-2007, 10:00 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Ya a guy designed this for me.Guys u people are asking that the headings of the posts are not clear so what about if there colous is changed.
And let me know what you guys will suggest best colour combinations.Thanks to all.Reput added to each.

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Old 10-02-2007, 07:17 AM   #16 (permalink)
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I agree with TheFriend - the purple, green, black and white make a pretty colour scheme.
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Old 10-02-2007, 08:48 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Upsonians,

As other people have suggested, post titles are difficult to read.. apart from this it would be better if you could make the text justified so that it gives a look of text in equivalent lines. Another thing that I would suggest is to decide upon a theme for this blog.. although it may be your personal blog and you might be free to write whatever you feel like, but still you see you need people's interest in reading your blog.. I mean it confuses me a lot when you talk about Islam and Katrina Kaif on the same blog. It would be good that you decide either to talk about Islam or Katrina Kaif or Adnan Sami because all these are not at all related and would be conflicting.. I mean people who are interested in Islam and are followers of it may not like to see you talking about Katrina's beauty and Adnan's songs.. I hope you get my point buddy
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As other people have suggested, post titles are difficult to read.. apart from this it would be better if you could make the text justified so that it gives a look of text in equivalent lines. Another thing that I would suggest is to decide upon a theme for this blog.. although it may be your personal blog and you might be free to write whatever you feel like, but still you see you need people's interest in reading your blog.. I mean it confuses me a lot when you talk about Islam and Katrina Kaif on the same blog. It would be good that you decide either to talk about Islam or Katrina Kaif or Adnan Sami because all these are not at all related and would be conflicting.. I mean people who are interested in Islam and are followers of it may not like to see you talking about Katrina's beauty and Adnan's songs.. I hope you get my point buddy

Ya i know that but the post of ISLAM was posted just for a thread here in this forum.Where some people were using very harsh words about ISLAM and Muslims.So i postet that post and give the link in that thread to read out about ISLAM.Hope you got my point.
And thanks for ur suggestion.
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