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Old 01-13-2008, 03:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi,

I would like you to review my new weblog.
This site is a weblog for webmasters but also my personal portfolio:
http://www.onyx-design.net/weblog2/

Please give your opinion about the content and the design.
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Old 01-13-2008, 02:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice Layout.

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Needs a better background.
Header image is annoying with that effect. Perhaps a different image.
Logo is badly needed.

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Old 01-22-2008, 11:26 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for your reply Skinny!
What exactly do you think I need to improve on the background?
Is a gradient too simple?
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Old 02-09-2008, 02:37 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I've made some changes to the website:
- Added a background
- Added shortcuts for social bookmarking websites
- .... and a new article
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Old 02-09-2008, 03:52 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Looks ok to me. The height of the header looks out of place, however. Not sure why.
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Old 02-15-2008, 10:16 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Overall its nice, and simple... but you need to redo the header. It doesnt really say anything too exciting. Put some more thought into it, and make a logo for yourself, and you'll be good!
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Old 02-16-2008, 04:16 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Thanks for your comments.. Everyone mentions the header so I guess I have to make a new one. Just waiting for some inspiration ....
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Old 02-24-2008, 07:21 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I changed a lot about the site, most of the work was backend, installing plugins etc.
I also changed the footer, it now shows recent articles, recent comments and the credits. I also thought that the images next to the articles were too simple so I redid some of them. The background is a gradient again, the background I had was too distrating imo.

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Old 02-24-2008, 05:36 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Just another wordpress site - bad seo - Same metas repeated on each page (except the title) ensuring it won't be indexed properly....... (get the addon)

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Old 02-25-2008, 02:16 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Just another wordpress site - bad seo - Same metas repeated on each page (except the title) ensuring it won't be indexed properly....... (get the addon)

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addon is installed now, and the problems are solved
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