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Old 05-03-2008, 08:05 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi there,

I just updated and improved my website. I would appreciate any feedback or advice of how to improve the site.

Here the link how to make a website how to make a website


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Old 05-03-2008, 10:49 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Right off the bat. (first impressions) Very plain, amateur looking.
Then I notice you have some thing centered, some to the left. After reading it, I wouldn't suggest it to anybody. You bounce around too much and give little to no information for somebody who has no idea on how to make a web site nor web page.

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How to make a website bullet Website Hosting Tips - Factors To Consider When Choosing A Website Hosting Company

If you use the services of a web hosting company then you will upload all of your files to their web server (shared hosting or dedicted). An ISP (Internet Service Provider) ensure a constant, fast connection to the internet.

If you choose to host your site yourself, then you will need dedicated (24 hour) internet access for your web server. All your HTML pages, images etc. will be uploaded and hosted on a your own web server.
How do I find out if it's fast? What should I ask? See what I mean. You make statements with no explanations.

When I read you title the first thing I was thinking was "cool, this person is going to teach me how to make a web site or refer me to different places." All that happen was I was more confused.
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Old 05-03-2008, 11:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks corneo for your advice and constructive criticism.

This is a work in progress and the articles will improve and more will be added.

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you've got the information there and its well laid out. now put your back into the template.
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I think the site has an exceptional content and has an interesting appearance except to the color scheme of the template and the bundle of links in the footer which make it look like a directory....but rest are all good!
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If you ask me, i see page stuffed with endless keywords and phrases that used more like to appeal to SE than to real people.

Other than that, site looks fine and may give something to newbie who need to start somewhere.


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